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Cleaning Up The Neighborhood

OK there dastardly Dan
I've caught you with the goods
I'm gonna take you in
'Cause I'm cleaning up the neighborhood

My Deputy will put your handcuffs on
So turn around, with hands behind your back
Don't try any funny stuff with me
I'm as sharp as a one cent tack

Now, start moving and keep your step in rhyme
Me and my Deputy have to be home by Suppertime

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  • Roaddog Wolf
    July 27, 2008

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    Lol great take on the photo prompt fun to read I enjoyed this one Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest


  • dustookie2
    July 26, 2008

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    Great ending wonder how many times that was said ....real tough hombres. Brilliant take on the prompt. I am having a ball reading all the different entries.Good luck in the contest.


    • Katie Lazette
      July 26, 2008
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      Thank you dustookie2 for reading my poem and your very kind comment.


  • apoeticinjustice gold member
    July 19, 2008

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    haha, great take on the picture. This brings me back to my childhood. If I wasn't playing with toy guns, I was making bows and arrows or chasing outlaws on my horse. A very enjoyable read.
    Rory


    • Katie Lazette
      July 19, 2008
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      Thank you Rory, so glad you enjoyed my poem and that it brought you fond memories.

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