Treacherous seconds pass
Immeasurable pain
Concede only to blurred vision
A tears falls
I cannot Breath
Pride shattered
Brokenhearted I stand Alone
Author notes
I was trying to express how I felt when I walked in on my husband and my neighbor.
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Hope this is what you had in mind.
A contest entry
- 22 Words by Mrs LadyEnthralling.
700 points, ended July 28, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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goodness are they in thier graves? oh my i wish i could have gave you more words to describe it good luck in the contest
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No but a girl can't help but dream...lol
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Ouch!
I'm just trying to picture the look on your husbands face. Wow what a cheat, doing that to you.
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