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For You

No i wont

do that

Yes i will

do this

But will you

please try

To see through

my eyes

 

When can you feel

the heart

When can you trust

the love

When can you tell

other with

Passion that i'm yours

 

because i am yours

no i wont do that what

you are afraid of

yes i will keep loving you

with all my heart

 

I will wait through

all the years

When will you stop

having the fears

 

Waiting with

love

Thinking of

You

Looking at

Calender

Counting days

and.. 

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  • Lislaine
    September 18, 2008

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    Very nice very nice, me likey it, me likey it
    Beautifully written, It feels that the poem has been written for me, Cause I'm still trying to stop my fears


  • unavailable
    September 18, 2008
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    Thankk you Soul.

  • unavailable
    September 3, 2008
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    Oh this is so good,
    I'm so glad to read this one.


  • LoverBoy4u
    July 27, 2008
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    i am totally angry with poetryintheblood
    this poem should have won gold there

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    July 24, 2008

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    Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • movedon
    July 22, 2008

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    WHOA! This is a very interesting write. I really like the way you created a strong push-pull feeling. I'm not sure exactly what you're talking about what you would and would not do, but I do know this was very well deserving of the Honorable Winner! Congrats!

    Warmest,
    Mylee


  • xXBrutalRomanceXx
    July 17, 2008
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    this is a great love poem. good work, i really like it. im glad you did well in this contest.


  • samm
    July 16, 2008
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    with this kind of wordplay, youre probably a womanizer (or a romantic)
    lol kudos :]

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    July 16, 2008
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    Beautiful sentiment Rehan, when you find your true love, I know you will show her the utmost of respect and care, your friend Josie


  • Hakon
    July 15, 2008

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    Nice poem. The sentiment you express for her indicates more. "When can you tell
    other with
    Passion that i'm yours"

    The meaning here escapes me. Could you clarify what you meant?


  • Jenny84
    July 15, 2008
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    yes

    I love this poem it is very sweet good job


  • kel dog
    July 14, 2008
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    this is great. i love it. its so sweet.


  • whos my humblepie
    July 14, 2008

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    I would credit you over and over again if I could.
    I really like this. This is one of the poems that I love.


  • z etoile
    July 14, 2008
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    Very simple and heartfelt great job!


  • xmydeathwishx
    July 14, 2008
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    i luv it

    this poem is so sweet it really shows yr feelings yr very good at poetry keep it up x x


  • XxX-Ivy-Love-XxX
    July 14, 2008
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    great poem!


  • TwoFacedPsycho
    July 14, 2008
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    Awww! How sweet!


  • whos my humblepie
    July 14, 2008
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    HOT....HOT.....so dang HOT
    ooooh.....ahhh....I'm feelin sweet little flutters
    in places you don't need to hear about.


  • Hetha gold member
    July 14, 2008
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    You wrote this for me? This is sweet..I do love it!

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