Plus sign turned blue
Now what do I do
A new life living in me
My mindset now changed
My life rearranged
Gotta act responsibly
No smoking No drinking
Just positive thinking
Visit the doctors all the time
Start knitting Crocheting
Painless birth training
Try not to get elephantine
That one tiny thing
Changes everything
Makes you age in twenty four hours
From conception to birth
Those hours have worth
As motherhood blossoms like flowers
Author notes
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Excellent poem, love the ending. Thank you for entering.


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"Plus sign turned blue
Now what do I do
A new life living in me
My mindset now changed
My life rearranged
Gotta act responsibly"
Nice poem, especially like that first stanza. The only thing I'm slight picky of is that is I asked for the prompt option in the AN, but ah well.
Thank you for taking the time to enter
Claire x



