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Positive reaction

Plus sign turned blue
Now what do I do
A new life living in me
My mindset now changed
My life rearranged
Gotta act responsibly

No smoking No drinking
Just positive thinking
Visit the doctors all the time
Start knitting  Crocheting
Painless birth training
Try not to get elephantine

That one tiny thing
Changes everything
Makes you age in twenty four hours
From conception to birth
Those hours have worth
As motherhood blossoms like flowers

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  • RX-Queen
    July 21, 2008
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    Excellent poem, love the ending. Thank you for entering.


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    July 18, 2008

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    "Plus sign turned blue
    Now what do I do
    A new life living in me
    My mindset now changed
    My life rearranged
    Gotta act responsibly"

    Nice poem, especially like that first stanza. The only thing I'm slight picky of is that is I asked for the prompt option in the AN, but ah well.

    Thank you for taking the time to enter
    Claire x