If only I could say something more
a toast to your health
hopefully which includes me
could you give our love a chance
Could you see
I loved you
from the very beginning
I never meant the things I did or said
it was just me being stupid
Would you love me again
if I said I'm sorry
and cried you an ocean
which I was to swim to prove I'd go any distance
just to say that I loved you
Author notes
I saw ur contest and wanted 2 enter ^_^ I hope I've done good in showing my emotions here. I'm a little tired, so if my words seem lazy and unflowing plz forgive me.
07/13/2008
A contest entry
- If Only.... by jasminerose.
1050 points, ended July 23, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Say What You Want, If it's hurtful u'll be ignored
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Would you love me again
if I said I'm sorry
and cried you an ocean
which I was to swim to prove I'd go any distance
just to say that I loved you
A very powerful ending to this piece, hun. Greatly written and nicely penned with a depth of emotion that crashes over you like a monsoon. Amazing! -
Heartfelt and beautiful...Ty for entering!
Lynda
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You did a wonderful job expressing all that is in your heart!! Thank you so very much for entering this beautiful heartfelt poem into our contest!!
Jasminerose
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love is a strong feeling that makes us go to any lengths, or so i have heard, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Wow, this is so heartfelt
and beautifully written.
It takes a lot to say I'm
sorry and you did it so
well in this piece. Lovely
work and good luck to you
with this one in this contest!
Jeremy0826 -
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Thank u ^_^
~Lorissa~
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