Sitting here alone, in this dark corner
Feeling depressed
Hoping that someone will talk to me
Wishing someone will make me feel strong
Make me feel happy
Instead of weak and insignificant
I am tired that everyday I make someone happy
I cheer them up when they are down
I ask them if there are any problems in their life
No matter who you are, I want you to be happy
If you are homeless I will give you money
If you need a friend I will be there
And if you are depressed I will give you a hug
That is just the way I am
Some call me a push over
Some say I’m a fag
But I am not
I do those things because I care
Because it kills me to see someone sad and not do anything about it
I don’t ask for anything in return
I wouldn’t do that
But for once it would be wonderful if someone would
Give me a hug
And tell me that “I am here for you”
That would be sad if I were gone
Is it crazy to want to be told at least once?
"I love you"
"I want you to smile"
"I wont let you die"
I can only remember 8 years of my life
8 of the most painful years I have lived so far
And in those 8 years every second of every day I have been tortured
I have been brutally beat, physically burned and mentally damaged
Do you know what it is like?
Not having anyone to talk to
No one to tell where I hurt
No one to hug me
No one to say “It’s not your fault”
I just wish that for once in my life I could here someone say
"I’m here for you"
"You mean the world to me"
"I love you"
Author notes
hey this is a poem i wrote,, it probably is like all the rest of mine ( bad ) but i dont care, i really like this one and wanted to share with all of you.
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what do u think..be honest cause i cant write
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AMAZING!
I loved it. Very..emotinal. I know how you feel and I'm honestly sorry you've been put through that. You're an amazing writer.
^-^ can't wait to read more
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thanks for the comment
cant wait to read yours
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Great poem. i loved it
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thanks for reading my poem,,, its great to connect with people,,, i cant wait to read your poems, ttyl
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I love this +D
im excactly the same too
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This poem holds more truth than you realise
It is an excellent poem and You know what? I also feel this way. It would be nice to hear those things. I could say them to you and you could say them to me, but it's those people around us that we want to hear it from. They are the ones that take us forgranted,always expecting us to be there. ..You did a great job. Well done.
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Nobody is insignificant, or should feel that they are.
I love the second stanza, and I wish that there were more people like that around.
I'm here for you if you ever want to talk.
Thankyou for entering and best of luck.
Forever--x
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I think that those two words are the most important ones of all. I LOVE YOU. Good write
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I can relate to this peice quite a bit. Its a very powerful peice and you get your message across very well. theres alot of pain in here and i just wanna give you a hug now
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Awww, this almost drew tears from my eyes. It shows such painful emotion in such simple writing. I love it!
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hey! your like my twin *HUGS * I do care about you and if you ever need to talk, you know where to find me. This is a great poem, it has alot of pain, but its not selfish pain lkike alot of other poetry on here no It seems more quite the opposite you wanna help people and thats AMAZING!!!! i love this write, its really really good keep it up ok.
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I still like it
Good luck in the contest!
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wow!
Heck, you can so totally write! (who said you cant!?!) this is the most touching piece i've read! honestly, this is lovely! it instilled such wonderful emotions in me... and your last few lines just hit hard! it was heart-breaking, painful yet in the end, a beautiful write! stunning, keep penning kays!
LOVED IT!!!
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i disagree...this poem is not bad at all. it is so emotional...really tugs at my heartstrings. i'll give you a virtual hug for this one...i know its not as good as a real one, but its a hug nonetheless. keep writing, get all those feelings out..ill be reading =)
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thanks
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Not bad at all...I really enjoy the structure and the text...people don't know shit about being ditched. People like you and me do everything for people...just to get it back ONCE IN A WHILE...EVEN ONCE ONLY! It's so ironic how we live for others...but other people can't pick up their phone.
"Sitting here alone, in this dark corner
Feeling depressed
Hoping that someone will talk to me
Wishing someone will make me feel strong
Make me feel happy"
Oh how I've longed for this...seems to be a lost cause sometimes...
Very personal...I see the effort into this...the spacing at the end adds to the effect of longing...just for simple words that can make us so happy. I really did feel this peace. Great emotion here. 8.5/10...keep going.
PS...read 2 of my poems. 'SICK OF IT' and 'Just Be Prepared'...you'll enjoy. -
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