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Black Angel

Exiled from heaven
But turning away from hell

She stands on the skies of the people
Above the city's tombstone buildings

Darkness curved around her form
Mingling with the turquoise sky

The people see her
Call to her

But she is lost in her own skies

And they are ignored.

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  • Ethereal One gold member
    July 14, 2008

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    You created some very interesting images with your words in this poem. I enjoyed reading your translation of the picture.

    Thank you for your entry, and good luck!

    Ethereal One