one could say she'd earned it
living with him was not easy;
spent profusely, constantly
her own money, as well as his
he loved her, so he let her be
shelves of shoes, scarves;
many never worn, but looked pretty
all placed neat and tidily in place
only the best for his sweetheart
so he paid the bills as they came;
when she left, so did the card
he cut her off, no more platinum for her
Author notes
Prompt: platinum
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 6 of 6
-
OOOPs! i forgot the clappies...LOL
Dennis
-
Good descriptive write, setting up the reader for the final line, an aha moment without the haiku, how clever! Well done my friend!
Dennis
-
Well done!
I think you had fun with this (tongue in cheek)!
-
Cool take on the prompt.
-
Nice take on the prompt!
Payment and payback all in three neat verses. Well done and good luck.
-
Oh dear, the perils of blinded love. It's interesting how one person can give up everything for someone, even when it's obvious they are being used. This is a sad little tale, although the ending gave me a chuckle
. I also like that you strayed away from the metal 'platinum'; and instead refer to the credit card; and gross-overspending.
Thank you for entering my contest & g'luck
~Pt
Adding your comment:
1 - 6 of 6
