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dance of grace

silk on skin
borders of lace
show some but leave
sweet outlines to trace
delicate kisses on the inside of thigh
roving hands making me sigh
your breath on my neck
and down to the lace
slow undulations
a dance of pure grace
speeding the heatbeat
...setting the pace

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  • vitch
    September 28
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    probably one of the best ones i've read of yours.


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    July 15, 2008

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    now this is truly a lovers dance...sighs...you have painted a most wonderful picture of love across your canvas of words thank you kindly for entering


  • hotchocolate gold member
    July 13, 2008
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    This is beautiful I like this!!!