Before my day turns into dust
my heart bleeds a final river of rust
my dreams are distant full of rage
my life has no turning page
before my soul looks to the skies
Oh God please help me open my eyes.
Author notes
Maybe he will hear me
A contest entry
- open my eyes... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended July 23, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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amen..amen..amen..I love the internal voice of the words.....well done ..and my thanks for entering such a wonderful entry in my contest...
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A great prayer. One we should all be saying many times over.
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Thanks so much!
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Oh how we all wish God will grant us our escape. It's cool how you convey something pretty much everyone feels at one point or another in so few lines. I like that. Great write and best of luck. -R.T
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Thanks for your awesome comment!
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