This morning's early breeze
has plucked leaves from the trees:
leaving a bright carpet display
to pleasure those who pass this way.
A contest entry
- 22 Words by Mrs LadyEnthralling.
700 points, ended July 28, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Quite beautiful and not at all what I was expecting.
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Very short and sweet. Well written and consise, as well as powerful and true. Excellent write!
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very nice here i think you did a very great excellent job with this piece thanks for entering the contest and good luck to you
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