Will your eyes witness
rounded desire, surrounding
in soft lavender stars
...to drift as dreams upon breeze?
Will your steps draw near
amidst a field, awakened
as skies of boundless blue
...whisper of glad surrender?
Will your heart recall
a wild beauty, forsaken
as shared hours wilt and fade
....vision plucked in summer heat?
Author notes
Image credit: "Globe Thistle" by Riedochse
Prompt: "thistle" in 60words or less
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Comments
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How lovely. You took the prickle out of the thistle; and made it into something quite lovely
. This is very soft and oh so pleasing; it really makes you float on the words. The ellipse before the questions makes them linger in your thoughts. A very nice piece.
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Now that is a very pretty take on Thistle! I didn't know they could look so lovely but that picture certainly shows they can!
Beautiful write
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