When we twist and go
When we taste the snow
and put on a cool show
We jump around to and fro
Spaced out on cristal ice
spaced out parasites
magic stuff to tickle us nice
It takes us out of our heads
out of our heads
It takes us out of our heads
out of our heads
Yeah it takes us right out
of our heads
and bloody upsets the Feds
Disco biscuits in the round
sharing the golden brown
junkie lust taking us higher
taking us higher and higher
shooting up for our desire
We don’t care who knows about us
We don’t understand the fuzz
Fantasy on a bus
lunacy there to cuss
Showing off for twice da fun
Going a spinning around everyone
Showing off till we are smashed
and done
Doing again the twist and go
Hanging out for a little snow
and putting on a show
Jumping around the ice bus
to and fro
Spaced out in paradise
spaced out parasites
doing it crazy on ice
It takes us out of our heads
out of our heads
It takes us out of our heads
out of our heads
Yeah it takes us right out
of our heads
and bloody upsets the Feds
Author notes
Inspired by a moment in a junkies mind, written as a possible song
In a list
A contest entry
- Music To My Ears by Brandan Shamaya.
600 points, ended July 22, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - worst PW by Wind Walker.
400 points, ended January 5, 34 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please let me know what your thoughts are on this poem
Comments
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This would make A great song =)
Very catchy...
I have one question for you...
Witch Music genre would you sing it in?
Great write
-♥Amanda♥ -
Wow great lyrics
I really like this
there is one place I think could be better
"Fantasy on a bus
Fantasy plus "
maybe
Fantasy on a bus
Fantasy a plus
and enstead of " off" try "of"
the rest is sheer magic
one day I'm sure I will hear this as a top 10 song
Good Luck in the contest
W W -
Great. Not the greatest, but i love it. Odd images come into my mind when i read it, and it's kind of a funny thing. Drugs are odd little monkeys that love toying with your head for you. Well done, but it could be written a little better.
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