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Kisses Goodnight

Deranged stalker of the night
I make my escape from wherever I am
The moon my only companion
It longs for itself to be pure again
And no longer be stained with the blood
Of a dark velvet rose
That I set in the grass in wait
Of something I don't even know
Kisses goodnight
From dying red lips
To an innocent star
To wildflowers and misfits






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  • WOW

    this is amazing.i love it..
    your words are beautiful
    great job!


  • Sadpuppet
    December 14, 2008
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    sad, beautifully written. I love it! More painted words. You're good at making people think.


  • The Otep
    August 5, 2008
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    This is stunning (like youuu, hehe) and this is lovely! Great job yet again, awesome niece of mine


  • movedon
    July 31, 2008
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    AMAZING IMAGERY!!! I loved this piece. Beautiful work!

    love ya
    mylee


  • spideracer
    July 25, 2008

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    Blood runs through

    Noticed you checked out some of mine earlier, so doing the same. Not a bad write about vampires, and just wanted to say, Nirvana rock!!


  • The Otep
    July 23, 2008

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    whoa! I swear, you have freakin talent!! Amazing as always, niecey of mine!! Great job!!

    *btw- I know that this doesn't have a thing to do with poetry, but I can now play "Polly" by Nirvana on guitar. I thought of you immediately!*

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