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Gotta Be Shrewd, Dude!

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When you're living among
your peers,
m'dears,
it's all on the tip
of your tongue.

With these pads on my feet
that cling on a treat,
you get to go
places so neat!

It's just so much fun
to sit in the sun,
I'm the King with the Bling,
bar none.

When you're living among
your peers,
m'dears,
a lizard's a hero
unsung.


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  • You have a way with creatures.

    Wonderful to know how one can really observe the minute details and Bingo the poem hits out in beauty of words.
    I hate classy styles.
    This for me is art.

  • Great rhyme scheme! I love the last stanza. Keep writing and good luck in the contest!
    ~Kayne


  • HolyMan28
    July 13

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    Hah.

    This is very well done. It's humorous and professional.

    Nice work, and good luck in the contest thing.