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Headache

My head was pounding
looking around I wonder
what bulldozer hit me!

Nauseating smell from the glass
sitting on my nightstand,
getting to my feet felt a bottle
as it lie on the floor
still a few gulps to be drunk.

Everything came back to me
tried drowning the news I got…

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  • Luna Tique Fringe
    July 29, 2008
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    can't say I haven't been there. Thanks for the entry


  • Renegade Theory
    July 14, 2008

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    That little twist, almost, at the end was nice. It's a cool line, "...tried drowning the news I got..." Brilliant.