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Eye for an Aye

Bye the time I reached the ship
he was waving by

His buoy was balling,
As the boy was bouncing like a bawl

They were going for crews
As the ship’s cruise were on board

As she leis in the sun
Each passenger receive a lays

they were lightning their loads
A bolt of lightening lit the sky

Ship reach the locks
As I put the keys into the lochs

This was just some of my mews
Thinking as I drive down the row of muse

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    July 14, 2008
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    Very Nice,

    All the best within the contest!

    -Timothy


  • Melodies
    July 13, 2008

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    Oh, so smart and fun to read, too! Congratulations on being able to bend your mind so nicely.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    July 13, 2008
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    lol very good!

    ilove the sea of the wavy scenes you painted, thank you for this entry, good luck
    Lin