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as she wishes

A question is posed a feeling less answer 
The words leave me blank I long not to speak
I scribble my thoughts just as she wishes
For my muse bows to no one 

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  • CelticQueen
    July 20, 2008
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    And the muse is always in control!

    Thanks for entering the contest. celtic queen


  • requiempoet gold member
    July 18, 2008

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    Welcome to the site. I would like a reason why this poem fits in the contest. I'd also like a poem that fits with the *individuality* theme.

    Thank you

    Breathe


  • queen Moderators member
    July 15, 2008

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    Welcome To all poetry

    Hi Oresama

    Excellent poem, you say a lot with few words that is hard to do Good luck to you in the contest Please keep writing, reading and commenting
    Barbara
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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 15, 2008
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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    I love that last line, for your muse should bow to no one. Very original and well said for such a short piece. Nice job and good luck in the contest.

    Welcome to AP. If you have any questions or need help with anything, feel free to IM me.
    Keep expressing through writing.
    Storm
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