Gentle sweet rain
Musical templates dost thou ring
You have put within my heart
A vision of which I sing
Two hands touch
Electric moonlight breaks the dark
Empowered by the rush
Intrigued by the spark
Liquid fusion kisses exchange
With eyes that have never met
Tasting the flavor of each word
Words made not to forget
They fill the lonely days and quite nights
And you may think it no big deal
But tell me my love,and tell me true
Is any of this real
For it's from my soul
That my words I always take
...Or is it...Has it always been...
Can you decide what is real or if it's fake
It's as though you had me
Right from our start
Twisting and turning this way and that
You made your way into my heart
How is it I miss someone I never met
Though I shall never complain...
Only tell you play on darling mistress...
Play on gentle sweet rain
Author notes
xxxlizardkingxxx
A contest entry
- Love Poems! by Peachy.
1400 points, ended July 20, 2008, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this was beautiful also, I dunno what to say about it but that it was just so simple yet stunning, beautiful words. Awesome job and congrats on your honorable mention
Blessings,
~Michaela~
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I don't know why, but this made me feel something-no idea what it is though! Could be sadness, happiness; I've no idea!
I loved it though; really and truly loved it.
Thanks for entering!
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beautiful
absolutely beautiful
i can't even begin to descripe the picture that came into my mind as i read that.
gorgeous poem -
This is so.. Beatutiful. Soft and pleasing. Its a real pleasure to read and made me smile, best of luck to you in this contest. Sounds like I'm to the only one that loved this. =)
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Oh, this is what I was telling you about. Such raw beauty in such bitter pain. I love this poem, you have done it again. Never do you let me down when I come looking for a great read.
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What a wonderful take on the prompt! This is past amazing! I love it! Love the
"Play on gentle sweet rain"
that has a personal meaning to me, so that is why it grabbed me
Best of luck to you in this contest!
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Ah..the rain of the sentiments of love have wet my muse as well....well done..and my thanks for sharing it ....
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I love the flow of this. Especially the last 2 lines, as it just brought the entire piece together. A most wonderful write. Thank you for entering!
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