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My weird Challenge..Lol.

disaster in the making,
to be free... Becoming smooth
like a 's fur..
Midnight waves move so hauntingly,
As it sings with a beautiful ..

Lingering in
sweet scents of es
Shining bright like a

Intense like a
in the dead of night..
moving like a gypsy
Sensual and sweet..

Up and down bringing
es to me..
Making me to go out
in of day..

Beauty moves so temptingly
is in the air
thanks to my hairbrush you love me..



Author notes

Give life to something like a needle or brush...or whatever. must be at least 3 stanzas long

First Challenge


My hair brush!!! lol.. It's weird I know.. And doesn't make sense I'm sure..Lol. I suck at these lol..

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  • maralisa silver member
    July 14

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    Beauty moves so temptingly
    is in the air
    thanks to my hairbrush you love me.. wonderful I loved your poem lol


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 14

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    hehehe... fabtastic!!! You should have entered this in Aurora Ceres' emoticon contest!

    Love it!


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    July 14

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    LOL! You did this so well!
    Congratulations and great work
    with this weird challenge of
    yours! Keep it up!




    Jeremy0826

  • Cannonsfire silver member
    July 13
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    lololol I think you did it very well and I smiled at the end


    • Angelflower Greeters member
      July 14
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      It was so weird to write thats for sure.. But I'm guessing I did ok..Lol.

  • Sensual Angel gold member
    July 13

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    OMG Sissy.. I loved this so much.. I laughed all the way through it. this was quite funny. you did a fantastic job with this challenge.. I love you sissy. Keep this poem up and never get rid of it. it took me a bit to figure it out. but I did it YEAH!!! you didn't suck at all.

    time for the next part of the challenge.. don't worry no emoticons ok.

    more serious stuff.

    kat


  • solo wisp gold member
    July 13

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    Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ... not the hair brush! *sniff sniff* heh

    of course it make sense .... you are just THAT good.

    *hides in an unbrushed portion of your hair*


    • Angelflower Greeters member
      July 13
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      Glad that you liked it..

      grr!!! with my hair, trying to get the fairy out of it* Lol..

  • luna-midnight gold member
    July 13

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    omg thats funny
    great write, and keep it up
    stephanie ♥
  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    July 13

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    Haha this made me just because it is so silly you did a good job though goodluck in your challenge best wishes always
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