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breeze

breeze tumbles bright leaf
end over end to reach me
gift of maple tree

A contest entry

Smile... all the while...

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  • individuality gold member
    July 17

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    a good piece of poetry, let the wind give many gifts of nature as time slowly winds across the smiles which we gently give back.


  • marlene47 silver member
    July 16

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    Very nice - breeze delivering a maple leaf gift. I liked the motion, tumbling to you. Congratulations on gold.
    Marlene

  • The Poetic Angel gold member
    July 15
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    butiful congrats on the gold

  • ambergriss gold member
    July 13

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    Oh this is amazing. I see the leaf going end over end and even feel the breeze. The count is great and there are no caps either. Thank you for the entry.

  • james119
    July 13
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    good imagery and nice ku

    well done
  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    July 13

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    Awwwww I love Haiku and I love the blowing of leaves in the autumn months thanks for sharing and goodluck in the contest best wishes and much love always

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