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Dance in the Moonlight

Dance with me,
in a boundless ocean of music filled with the light of a thousand moons.

The air we breathe isn't our only source of living.

Your hand inmine is the way I survive,
so fall for me in the dark,
in the sunshine we'll mold.

Our destiny is like that of the day break,
simple but strong,
illuminated by primary colors,
showing the comples where the vague stands still.

Together, a dynasty will stand,
whilst others have fell.

In the chambers of my soul I know that this feeling is something that even the mythical gods would long for.

So sing me a song,
gentle and true.

Show to me like the fish show the seas.

Tell me how the cycle works and confirm in me that all you do is true.

Water crashes upon the rocks,
the eclipse blocks the moon.

Eyes never betray the feelings,
so search my thoughts and know my sky.

Let's dance tonight.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 13, 2008

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    what a variety of the life shwoing the truths of life..and the immgery is quite strong as well..well done....