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falling leaves

leaves of golden flame
unbranched by autumn breezes
are scrunched beneath feet

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OK so I can't write haiku

A contest entry

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  • crimsondew silver member
    July 14

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    Here is a tanka for your beautiful haiku:

    fresh fragrance floating forward
    drifting me in its embrace


    lovely job, your haiku attempt is excellent...I personally love these little haikus...


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    July 14
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    Great haiku


  • Piccola gold member
    July 13

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    Nice job! I both hear and see the imagery. There should be no caps however, not even in the beginning of the haiku. Thank you for the entry.