If i couldn't find the words
to tell you i love you
would you kiss my lips
and show me what to do.
Words unspoken
eyes wide shut
loving the passion
emotions uncut.
Hold me closer
don't ever let go
and when i learn
i'll let you know.
A contest entry
- Anything && everything by edit my world..
492 points, ended September 17, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Writers Block..this was the best i could cme up with..:)
Comments
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short and sweet with a beautiful message.
thankies so much for entering. usually
i would copy and paste my favorite part
but this was all gorgeous. so wow.
it hit home for me too. *tear* this was
just awesome thankies for entering...again lol -
This is very beautiful. I especially love
"and when I learn
I'll let you know."
Amazing!!!
Oh, and also "Eyes wide shut". LOL. Creative twist on the popular saying! This poem is so beautiful. Amazing job, Whispering-Night!
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I think you did fine as you are trying to let the other person know that you may not say the words, it doesn't mean you don't feel it. And by admitting that you are not sure what to do in love, you know you feel love and willing to learn as you go just like the way love grows. Keep penning your emotions.
Ted E
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