You do give task,
but my task is cut out,
it is he who gave me it,
he branches out,
in millions and zillions ways about,
may be he did get in you some way,
now speaks through you loud,
sorry, I did not accept and obey at first,
but now I do,
as I realize,
it is he and not you,
who came about,
to guide the task.
Author notes
who came about,
to guide the task.
A contest entry
- Just Because by Riftkin.
1200 points, ended July 20, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Ode to Love. Picture Inspired. by Jade.Butterfly.
300 points, ended August 17, 2008, 6 entries
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1450 points, ended August 23, 2008, 16 entries
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Thank you for this entry in the contest for me, I enjoyed reading it very much.
Thanks to Jade for running this contest to cheer me up.
Love
Sue
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Whoa,Intense indeed.
I liked it very much.
-Mandi -
I like the mix of the active and passive voice, each threading throughout the poem just like how the title contradicts itself. Lots of tension that seems to resolve pretty well in the last line - nice effect. Neat work overall!
Thanks for commenting on my poetry; I haven't checked back here for a while, so I'm sorry for a rather late response. -
thank you for entering my contest Riftkin
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Intense
This is truly quality poetry.
So much said...so little written.
Endless possibilities!
wolf
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