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Into the Fire

Love is nothing but the purest fire,
                      enveloping every part of your body and soul.
Emanating such a deep desire,
        and leaving me feeling out of control.

          I was just only a child,
              when I fell into the eternity of your glare.
An instant connection that made me wild,
        were among the many things that we would share.

      Like the most innocent of kisses,
              underneath the shining stars and moon,
                                    and I think its me that misses
every sweet moment whose endings came too soon.

              Young love, first love, friendship, and fate,
                      all portrayed in a fiery tale,
      where the princess finds her mate,
                                and their love cannot derail.

            I knew it from the moment our lips met,
the ones I fell so hard into,
              into that eternity, that I will never forget,
                      of endless heartbeats that could beat only for you.

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  • perfectsunset gold member
    August 17, 2008
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    Wow.. just beauitiful!
    Loved this!

    thanks for sharing


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    July 15, 2008

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    so very sweet and yet filled with a loss...a true lovers kiss to never be forgotten...sighs...niaish so much for entering