Whether up or down,
where I’m not, I’d rather be –
till I’m there again.
In a list
A contest entry
- Back to Where I was...... by the tempest.
475 points, ended July 27, 2008, 19 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Simply fantastic! Love it and that your inspiration came from watching a squirrel chasing up and down a tree.
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Nicely done...I think you have captured the spirit of the contest nicely and done so in quite few words. I really like the feelings I get from this...very restless indeed
Good luck to you in this contest. I look forward to reading more of your work!
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....how true of a lot of us. Human nature and such. Good work.
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A brilliant use of so few words. You really captured the "grass is greener" effect but in such an original and thought provoking way. Wonderful work. Best of luck in the contest.
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Inspiration is without expectation. This came to me as I watched a squirrel racing up and down a tree for no apparent reason other than to be racing up and down the tree.
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brilliant!!!! so simple and yet powerful!
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