Swaying
encrusted limbs
tower to cloudless blue.
Green foliage creates cool shade.
Entwined
branches intermingle with twigs
stretching for open space,
seeking life’s gift.
Sun light
Author notes
Cinquain butterfly form.. 9 lines with syllable counts of 2,4,6,8,2,8,6,4,2
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Glorious Charley bug!!!!!
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Thanks Guin for reading and commenting. Always good to hear from you.
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Most wonderfully and beautifully penned!
Soft and serene write, my friend!
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Thank you for reading and commenting on this write. I appreciate it greatly.
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Great job
Reminds
me of the peace
I found at Boy Scout Camp
Summers of my youth forever with me
Thank you
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Thank you Bob for reading and commenting. Yeah I spent plenty of time at Boy Scout Camp myself, as a former Eagle
Scout and then ten years as a Scoutmaster. Alot of fine memories from those experiences. Thanks again.
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Beautiful write, Charley. Lots of imagery in this piece.
I like the way you ended this piece. It seemed to describe the beauty of nature well. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
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Thank you Haley for reading and commenting!!!! Love hearing from you, as always.
Charley
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very pretty form along with the poem, you penned beautifully...
thank you for this entry...good luck
Lin
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Thank you very much for your comment and considering this write in your contest. It is much appreciated.
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