You've broken my heart
the peices lay there on the floor
its over now, im starting to heal
dont ever come back knocking on my door.
The stiches are in place
and a brace is my support
you've crippled my heart
read that doctors report
Its not fair for me
that your trying once more
i wont fall for your tricks
after my heart-strings you tore
so leave now forever
i dont wanna see your face and your lies
help me after all you've done
release me from your ties.
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The whole "you shattered my heart and its pieces are on the floor" this is extremely cliche. Also, your rhyme feels forced; whatever happened to metre?
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*thing. I cannot type.
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You have potential I don't know what you mean that you are bad at this. I don't think you're bad. It's a bit shaky in some parts but it's fixable
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