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How the hell should I know?

Something in my head made my brain go pop,
Now that this has happened, I cannot seem to stop!
I want to be a pickleman, and to fall into trees,
I want to eat a bummblefrog and kiss a griaffe's knees.
I want to sail a giant mouse across the open waves,
I want to fry a handbag for this is what I craves.
I want to chase a purple moon around foreign shores,
I want to steal an elephant's tusk and bump it into doors.
I want to stop this randomness, I need to go to sleep,
But all I can do right now is dive into the deep.

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All hail The Passion Fruit Chocolate Man

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  • jossiemarie gold member
    July 14
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    lol, brilliant i love poems like this.
  • This piece of yours puts me in mind of the nonsense author, Edward Lear. Great imagery here and good ryhme too. Keep writing. Good luck in the contest.

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    Wayne Leon
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  • I love the rhymes, this is so awesomely random. =) Giggles and cheers all the way, good luck in the contest!

  • sandybeaches gold member
    July 13

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    I don't know about the pickleman...but do you know the muffin man? Ah...this is a funny little write! I enjoyed it! ***Pam***

  • Do you know the pickleman...yes you are. Sorry but I don't like it...it's too...sane for me. hahah I'm joking your not the pickleman, he is > Well done on a randomly awesome write. Write right white wow. Bye Thanks

    • BerthdduSuit
      July 13
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      Ha ha, thx (I think) I've been awaiting your comment with purple anticipation. I'm of to see the pickleman! Byeeeeeeee
  • i actually liked this alot...made me laugh like crzy
    I loved it

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