Since birth, you have changed me
You have brought smiles to my face
You have taken my heart out of space
So I say to you for time may change
A daughter is beauty at its finest
You have a heart of an angel
Soul so pure, and sweet
You are the most precious gift
God has bestowed upon me
Your smile, your face so tender
Your name reside at the
Highest point in my heart
Your smile quenches the thirst of my heart
You are a dewdrop that washed away my sins
You gave me a different world
So I kneel before you today to bless your soul
For you are the one that I adore
My daughter in my heart your soul lives
Forever and ever, you are the daughter of my soul
In a list
A contest entry
- i deserve a gold. by jossiemarie.
400 points, ended July 20, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Write me a poem for a baby! by TwiztidMaggot.
600 points, ended August 27, 2008, 36 entries
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Oh this made me cry, its so beautiful...my daughter and I used to be very close, but although she's made some destructive choices and is in a dark place personally, I still love her with all my heart and hope for the best. Thank you for sharing this.
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this is very lovely. the diction is thoughtful and emotive.
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This is so beautiful. Your love really shows in this write. Truly an inspiration.
This is what family is all about.
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to express the love for a child through words is had in its self, you have done a amazing job, your love and passion for this little one shines through, such a beautifull read.
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Beautiful, mate.
This poem just screams love and I am glad I have come across it.
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"Your name reside at the
Highest point in my heart"--This is a lovely sentiment. So true, only a child can do this.
"You are a dewdrop that washed away my sins
You gave me a different world"--Children really can change the world, if for no other reason than for what we will do to make it a perfect place for them. Children love and accept without bias. Great poem.
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"Since birth, you have changed me"
"You are the most precious gift"
"You gave me a different world"
These three lines really hit home for me. I've heard my Mom repeat them to me over and over again for as far back as I can remember.
I'm my Mother's only child, and since I was old enough to understand, she told me that I was the most important thing in her life, and that I always would be. She swears that I changed her whole point of view of the world and life itself, and that I had saved her life. That I was the one who finally got her out of the abusive relationship with my Father.
I'm too young to know the type of love for a child of my own, but I can feel it with every hug and kiss from my mom.
This is really a great poem. And it was even better that you daughter inspired it.
-Ashley
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Lovely little poem!
Love the blessing part! Though not a mother, I enjoy watching my sister gaze lovingly on her two sons in love... Ah! To each their own... I wish you well; peace and prosperity to you both!
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I love this
Beautifully written and so true -
This is absolutely beautiful and a
wonderful dedication to your little
girl. I am sure that she will love
reading this when she grows older.
Well done and good luck to you in
this contest!
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This is a very good peice! You did an absoulutely wonderful job writing it! I believe that all babies bring smiles to our faces... espeically our own family... (Like my neice... so precious!!!) Keepu p your great work! best of luck in my contest, thanks for entering.
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Congrats
I see you had your baby, I just want to say that congrats and Hope the motherhood will treat you better and wish you the best. I have not been on here for a long time since I was in training my time has been lomitted by work and missions a head of me and I am unable to connect with my peeps online anymore but it is a pleasure to see that you are doing good and again congrats and have a fabulous motherhood -
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Thank you very much. My son is getting so big. He's already almost 4 months old and weighs 15.12 pounds. He is the best little baby I have ever seen, aside from my little niece... she's almost a year old! lol.
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don't you wish?
don't you wish they just stay as little as they are when they were born? it is so hard to see them grow old and not be able to sit there and watch them sleep, lol well I am sure you will find fun times through his growth and may God be by his side God bless
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oh thats lovely, good luck in the contest hun.
what a brilliant dad you are. -
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Jossiemarie
Thanks for you kind wors, and thoughts, God bless.
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awww, This is so beautiful of a fathers love for his daughter. You my dear are a great father to have spoken such words.
How old is your little girl?
Mines 16 now but she still smiles that same smile that blesses me everytime!
Although i called her the tornado lol!
So sweetly written with such tenderness,
~Lisa~
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xianariaslifetime
Thank you for your kind words, I truly do appreciate your kindness, my daughter is 4 almost five, and my son is 2. and I know what you mean, they can grow old but those memroies will never fade, they stained your brain permenantly.
agian thank you and God bless her soul for you.
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