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Sunglasses

What does it take for you to see,
you and I can never be.

Fun you say, it's work
while liberty you take.
As I stand at attention,
as you run working
fancy free.

Free to be as you should "no worries",
you answer bad or good.

So what's the point,
why can't you see.
Your world is much too
confusing,even with three.

Country bumpkin in the minds
of your friends.
Wonder I do,if you snicker
and grin.

Don't wear fashions from Gayee Pairee
nor know latest jive
from A thru Z.
Yet weather at home or crusing
any of the seas,
you will find it
hard to forget
about me.

So far in life, no chance
of missing a glance
in its mirror and say:
self, I like you and we know why,
you treat others with respect,
no reason to hide.
You know when to blink to you,
your shadow talks.
Which road to choose so many it seems
prayer and sharing of words with you
I try, you laugh
in your dreams.

Country so what!!
There's beauty there too.
I sleep well at night.
How about you?

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Wish I could find music to this one.

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  • SwaGGtastic
    February 6
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    This is Nice right here... I enjoyed this alot.. i gotta get some of them sun glasses HaHa


  • ChemicallyEmilie
    October 25, 2008
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    i really like this.... great job!


  • aangie
    August 26, 2008

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    This flows beautifully, every word is matched perfectly. I reread around five times, I loved it

    Well done, also thanks for the comment.