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The Richest Woman In The World

 

 

"You'll be a very rich woman soon,"
you said to me,
and I looked at you and smiled.

Still you do not know
that I am the richest woman in the world.

 

 

I look into your eyes
and I see my skies and oceans blue,
everything that encompasses me
holding me from above and below
secure in knowing you love me.

 

 

So many years we traveled
to finally find each other,
through tribulations and trials
hoping to get life right
on our own,
until we found each other.

 

 

We are not complete
without each other,
no laughter is as deep,
no cure is as final
as when we are together.

My life is yours
and yours is mine,
and perfection in life is ours.

 

No woman in any lifetime
has ever been so loved as I,
the little girl
from the West Virginia hills,
bipolar and sporadic as hell
but, oh, so very loved
and it amazes me.

 

Riches?  You may keep them,
for I truly am
the richest woman in the world.

 

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  • Sweet Jane
    June 4

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    Wow that's very good, I hope that I will be the richest woman in the world and be in love with someday. you did a great job.
    have a great summer!!


  • Sweet Jane
    February 24
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    wow it's very good
    I love it alot


  • Darkwell
    October 17, 2008

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    oh WOW this is so beautiful and its so true that when you got the right person then other stuff like being rich doesnt mean as much. beautifully written!


  • LiMarie silver member
    October 10, 2008

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    Beautiful, so heartfelt and rings so true, it's that thing we all want no? To be utterly safe and secure in the knowledge that we are truly loved by someone we hold in high esteem and you've really captured this..


  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    October 1, 2008
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    so,, I decided to pop by my Sis and see what she's been up to, and wow, what a blessing I was gifted with.

    This is an amazing piece Sis, full of love and devotion through every word spoken.
    You are the richest woman and you know it well in your heart.
    Brilliant Sis, Brilliant.


  • Yemassee gold member
    July 15, 2008

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    A true story I see, lovely sentiment and of course real love (whether earthly or ethereal) is worth all the money Bill Gates and Warren Buffett possess. (Though I'd give away 10 percent for a few hundred thousand dollars)

    Lovely sentiment and just as well written.


    • pattyann4500
      July 15, 2008
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      Thanks, Yem. I understand you'll have a birthday soon. Happy B-day, Little Brother.


  • leo2
    July 15, 2008

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    You both have a priceless, timeless treasure to cherish and hold. A bit envious am I but so happy that you found it.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


    • pattyann4500
      July 15, 2008
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      Sometimes we just have to know what we really have. We don't always, you know. Thanks, Leo.


  • Sherry gold member
    July 14, 2008
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    Perhaps this is about the Lord because you mention about hows hes been there in your life. How he holds you above and below. Yes Jesus?? This would yes surely reflect that..... See private message-

  • Sherry gold member
    July 14, 2008

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    So very beautiful if this is fiction gosh Patty it seemed so very real as if it could be. Could this be about God Pattyann and his love for you this is really heartfelt. Course you couldn't look into his eyes unless it was a dream or perhaps a picture of him to inspire you to write such a beautiful piece. Okay perhaps about not the Lord but it surely reflects it to me. But if he can love us through all our short comings and us come to really feel and know this we feel his Spirit so deeply and a security to come cause we know he accepts us then how rich or blessed we are or will be to be in heaven someday okay. I could think this was about too some friend or special angel who's surely been apart of your life and loved you.
    I have to admit this is really beautiful and whoever this is about or to or even if its not about you and anybody.
    It surely is heartfelt because it reflects a beauty of what is love when somebody really stays beside us. Not turning away and that is priceless and rich beyond anything material such a remarkable piece Pattyann.
    ♥

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