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BEAST - Basic Emotional Animation String Therapy

Stimulating Cords
Tying tight
Burning deep
Grazing lightly
Oozing steep as they
Stretch and contract
Giving off satisfaction
As they slowly send their
Messages to and from a CUP CPU
Then onto the SAC up to a brain
Which is immersed in a fantasy
Induced by the stupor of a
Self prescribed trip by
Slowly tightening bonds
That are leaking the
Emotional content
Into the core
Of every last
One of the
Cells it
Lovingly
Entwines

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Thoughts on a Process i created

you can call me crazy but tell me why you think so.....

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  • The Otep
    August 7, 2008
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    Oooh, a process!Your vocab and poetic usage is wonderful!
    Greatness


  • InRegardsToMyself
    July 13, 2008
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    WOW!

    Greatness...sheer greatness!
    The way this was worded was simply amazing!

    Which is immersed in a fantasy
    Induced by the stupor of a
    Self prescribed trip by
    Slowly tightening bonds
    In my eyes probs the best worded section out of the whole thing...

    This was a really REALLY great write!


    • hypnorocker
      July 13, 2008
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      Thanks! Some of it is jargon (ie the acronyms CUP and SAC) so sorry if that doesn't make sense, I'm glad you found something in it though ...