i thought you were the one
as if you were my all
i thought you were my future
i thought you were my call
i know now i was wrong
i know you're a disgrace
i know now that you lied to me
now you i must erase
you led me on too long
you threw my heart off track
you're dead to me you *bunny*
im taking my life back
i thought that you were real
as if nothing would conceal
i thought you were so fine
i thought you were just mine
i know now you were fake
i know you're on the take
i know now you deceive
you never did believe
you left me cold for her
you threw it all away
you're nothing to me now
its time to seize the day
So Goodbye *bunny*
A contest entry
- For The Liars, The Cheaters, The LOSERS!!! by PerfectImperfection.
600 points, ended November 13, 2008, 36 entries
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Oh how I wish they would let you say the word lol!!! I am just evil like that right now ... This is a well expressed piece, and a fine write to fit in with this contest. Pained, and powerful - with confidence to rise again WITHOUT the "bunny"! Thank you for your entry!!!
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great poem so much pain
love it
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Great poem. Thanks for entering my contest and AP Councellor di guerra sounds good its a interesting choice :]
love,
Shelly -
WOOT! this is superb...I love it...your words trip through my mind so easily....excellent write!
Thanks for sharing, and all the best in the contest,
Luck.
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