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What would you?

If you could be anything,
what would you be?

Mabey a purple baboon on a skate-board,
or a Fluffy cloud?
A Quote, or mabey A thought spoken outloud?

Mabey an emotion?
Just mabey,
what one do you think,
you'd turn out to be?

How 'bout a color?
I'd choose Purple, Red, or Blue.
That's what I'd choose,
What would you?

Mabey hand-cuffs,
to help the police?
I don't think,
that'd be me.

I'd be a feather pillow,
to comfort at night,
those kids who will never get rid of the night light.

If you could be anything,
What would you be?

I don't think I'd choose Anything but me.



















Author notes

"All hail The Passion Fruit Chocolate Man"


hope you like this,
most of my poetry is dark, or get wells or stuff like that.
thanks for puting up the contest, cuz' I like the change in pace.
It's refreshing.

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  • Meroza
    July 14, 2008

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    Powerfull poem indeed, yet its so sad! I'd be a kitty forever, just being lazy in the sun and be cuddeled all day! That's what I would want to be.

    Best of luck in the contest


  • Mistress Masquerade
    July 13, 2008

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    Hmm.. Can I be.. A tattoo of.. A mime on a unicycle on an old lady's leg? I have no clue why I'd EVER want to be that. This poem made me luagh AND think!


  • No longer in use
    July 13, 2008

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    Ok now to the poem...I like it. And I don't know what I would be. I think i would be your last thought, your last breath, your last sight, your last kiss, an elephant...I was going to go with hippopotomus but I didn't know how to spell it. SPELL CHECK!!! Right as for the poem I like...I don't know what i would be...wow Deja Vu anyone...I like it. Thanks.


  • char-char
    July 13, 2008
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    WoW i love your poem
    its beautiful
    hey random girl if i dont win i vote for her ^

    • No longer in use
      July 13, 2008
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      I hope your not taking to randomly me. Because I, Anonymus as so says in my profile which I checked twice over says I am a Man. And the last time I checked it was true. So i am no girl, at heart yes, in body sincerely wish...

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