I love how you look at me
the way you talk with a plea
when I come home you’re there
requited love when compare
I fell in love on that day
Back in the month of May
Your green eyes show trust
my heart within was about to bust
On the day you decide to leave
Will be the day I grieve…
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A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration #10 by Frodofan.
300 points, ended July 14, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Poems That Begin With The Letter 'L'. by xxRainbowDawnxx.
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Comments
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It's lovely having someone like that isn't it, I know because I have someone special who is always wanting to be there for me and to be alone with me and hold me, he is such a sweetie.
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Made me think of strays that people don't own but become attached to because they visit so often. A sweet poem. A little choppy, like you left words out here and there - maybe to achieve a syllable count? But I think it would be smoother with them.
Nice. Thanks for entering.
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