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Thunder

In rapturous silence,
a God alone,
i roll with waves,
blistering inferno.
The great beyond
calls to me,
and i come to it,
for i already know:
He who submits, wins.
He who betroths the
wicked succubi,
shall have the Powers
of the mortal sins!
And in my darkness
as the lust unwinds,
in the later hours,
I know i can be one.
Ancient Kundalini,
self driven to Everest
like peaks, corrosive,
eats my minds defenses
and allows freedom,
shatters the Ego
like a powerful explosive.
At last, i am one,
self-begotten like Thunder
which needs only
the friction, collision.
And in a clap of sound,
a heady sigh of Thunder,
i am spent and my mind?
Utterly free and gone.

Author notes

having been involved with the occult for some time, this is an honest approach to how magicians think about masturbation if they come from a darker perspective.

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  • nichtmich silver member
    July 17, 2008

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    "Self-begotten like Thunder" my favorite line, this is powerful and the metaphor ingenious. The last line perfectly describes the after effects. Bravo!


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    July 13, 2008

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    So many do not comprehend the spiritual side of sexuality. I am not at all into the dark magics. I do although respect any who are following their heart and spirirt...that is as long as it adheres to the rede of "harm no one or nothing!". Thunder is a turbulent force and does seem appropriate for a write on cosmic orgasm. Thank you for your entry...most interesting to read another perspective.

    Blessed be~
    Az