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Lost and Confused

Alone in a big world
Afraid of what to do
Caught between two worlds
A child
A grown up
What to do?
Where to go?
Which path to take?
Which world to follow?
Lost and Confused
Not knowing which turn to take
Not knowing which path to choose
Going in the right direction
Going to another place
Lost and Confused
Only i can make the decision
Only i can choose
But in the end
I go to the new world
Lost and Confused
Not knowing what to do
It's time to leave
The old world behind
Time to grasp the new
But still
Lost and Confused
When i reach
This new found world
What am i to do?
Lost and Confused
Alone in a new world
Afraid of what to do
No longer caught
between two worlds
But still a little
Lost and Confused
I will find my way
Through this new bright world
To where i am no longer
Lost and Confused

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  • KitLynn
    January 4
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    Very well written and a wonderful write.

  • michaeline
    January 3

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    I think that this poem should have won a trophy.You expressed yourself well and the deep feelings in this showed all the way through.Great job.


  • Doll Faise
    August 6, 2008
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    Wow. Great write. This is really well written. Thanks for entering. Good luck.


  • XxForeverFaithfulxX
    July 17, 2008

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    WOW

    This is..wow...amazing! It left me speechless!! I loved it! It has an amazing flow to it and the emotion in this is..wow..ok it's just wow!!lol...Keep up the good work..you've got alot of talent!

    ~Kayla~


  • peregrin
    July 14, 2008
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    Wow, it is so.... wow.... very good.

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