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wishes

I wish I was a painter
to paint your pretty eyes
and the smile I miss
I wish I was a singer
so I'd sing for you
like for me you do
I wish love was just a word
so I'd just say it a million times
I wish I was a sailor
so far away I'd take you
I wish I was a psychic
so your heart
I could read
I wish
and I wish
and I try to fulfill this
I wish I was a kiss
to always stick to your lips
of you I dream
with love all my feelings scream
my eyes are so confused
not blessed by the sight
of the one my heart choosed

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  • NooNiThEWitcH
    August 1, 2008
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    very nice ya yasmina!
    Very beautiful, new and creative.. though unfortunately, we can't have this love of our life beside us all the time or at least as long as we would like to!

    Good job and keep on writing,
    Nooni

    (in the last line, the past tense of choose is "chose" not choosed though it does rhyme with 'confused')