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Constraints

Missing image

The sand flows

while we procrastinate

and time moves on,

whilst dabbling in

the inconsequentrial.

 

Whilst consumed within

calculated moves,

free spirits dance

the epiphany of informality.

 

Turrets of emancipation float ,

idly awaiting,

for liberated thought.

 

But the war continues

with futile words,

as the base of conformity

becomes locked

within black and white.

 

Precious moments are lost

in superiority's race,

as the protagonists stand by

already comprehending the outcome.

 

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CHESS by Vladimir Kush

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  • jcat gold member
    July 20
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    I really like the last line here.....Chess, the ultimate game of war!! Thank you for your entry


  • PhantomsAngel87 Greeters member
    July 14

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    O.o
    Full of life, this wraps itself around me and I have found myself reading it again and again.
    Wicked write hun!

    Best of luck
    ♥
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 13
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    Damn.. hate when I don't click on the clappies properly!! lol


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 13

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    You always manage to pull so much meaning out of pictures! Your words are very wise and true!
    Brilliant as always hun



  • Rovingone gold member
    July 13

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    A very interesting perspective on the passing of time and action. I like the way you contrast action with standing throughout.

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