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I Understand...Now It's Your Turn

Its weird
It's like you're a stranger
I look at you and know not who u are anymore
You look like the person I fell in love with
But then u open you're mouth and your someone else

I understand

You've been through so much
So many people have wronged you in ways that are unimaginable
Yet here standing in front of me, I see a change in you
A change retreating yourself from the world...from me & your children
A change in protecting your heart from yet another heartbreak

I understand

You lost everything two years ago
But you didnt give up on life...rather on love

I understand

But what you need to understand is
Not every woman cheats
Not every woman live to break good men hearts
There are magnificant women out here that will cherish a man
Who will love a man no matter the circumstances
Who won't give up on you - walk away from you

-So-

It's time for you to understand...
But are you willing?

Not all women are alike

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  • Angel of disaster
    October 23

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    very deep

    I loved this poem, you made it very deep and emotional. I love how you left the end with a question. This was a wonderful write, keep it up. I loved it.....Great Job!

    Love becca


  • fairyqueenwren
    October 7
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    This is great, I'm not really sure what to say but this really hit home right now. I'm glad you posted this, thank you


  • PurpleSky
    October 6

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    nicely written and loved the ending leaving it in question. thanks so much for taking the time to share this with us
    huggles
    lena


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    October 6

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    Betrayal does scar deep-and WAY TO WRITE!
    BRAVO! BRAVO! Loved your firm voice
    of courage and might!

    for if we serve our wounds
    (and believe me I have tried)

    the only person
    we -SACRIFICE-
    is -ourselves-

    starving
    our hearts
    of bold
    and courageous
    love!

    way to write it!
    and ouch! ouch!
    oh...betrayal hurts!

    ears/seattle





  • cgirl0410
    February 25
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    This is dope. I like the repetition. Trying to make someone see what's right in front of them, instead of focusing on what's in the rearview mirror. This piece is so true and it can apply to men and women. Great piee. - cgirl0410


  • Sadpuppet
    December 13, 2008

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    So many things in this world we can't understand... anyways, i love how you wrote this. It is really, really good.
    *smily*


  • I write art
    July 13, 2008
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    YES

    this is nice...


  • luna-midnight gold member
    July 13, 2008

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    wow, the repition works wonders for you, this is a very powerful poem and really got to the reader
    keep up the writting and take care,
    stephanie


  • HurtsKillsPains
    July 13, 2008

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    This is a strong poem. I love the feeling in it and yeah, like I said it's a strong poem and it's great! thanks for sharing it and I hope your alright.
    """You lost everything two years ago
    But you didnt give up on life...rather on love"""
    It's true not every woman lives to break mens hearts and I hope your person understands this soon!
    Good luck and Blessed Be
    Hurts kills pains
    Jessie


  • Swangrnv gold member
    July 13, 2008

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    wow

    A very poinant piece. The matter of fact manner in which this is written, with the clear indication seeking a chance to prove your sincerity makes this piece touching. good job poetess!

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