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Moonlit shadows of Love. . .

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How romantic!
Making love by the moonight...
Supercedes love anywhere
Excepting maybe a garden
or
By a waterfall!
The moon's silvry shadows
Always casts beautiful silhouettes...
And the shadows are more erotic
Than anything else I know...
With the droplets of water glistening
As they touch each others skin...
Such a pic is indeed a fairy tale...
A one of a kind feeling of...
Romance and Beauty combined!
And when one looks into the others eyes...
Only true feelings of love can exist
And the love therein..
Can ignite greater fires of passion...
Brighter than any fireworks!
Just the touching and nearness
Can electrify your body...
Without doig anything more than staring
Or just kissing each other!
You might think I'm crazy...
Feeling Love without the climax?
Well friends...
Try it!
Think of the Romance not the act...
And you will create your own fairy tale!
for
True roamnce is wihtin the heart
It also grows each day..
Like the budding rose.
If it dies, it was never love...
for
Love is much more than sex...
Its
Caring...
Touching...
Kissing...
and
Feeling each others silent emotions!
And when felt...
Love, can last for Eterities!

dragonheart1

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  • Noir mariposa...x
    July 18

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    Gawsh, how gorgeous
    I love the flow, it's defiantly unique

    I'll just point out a few spelling mistakes:

    (2nd line) moonight - moonlight
    (7) silvry - silvery
    (16) Separate the into and the
    (23) doig - doing
    (32) Roamnce - romance & wihtin - within
    (last line) Eterities - Eternities

    Sorry, nit picking lol

    Thank you very much for your delightful entry!
    Claire x


  • maralisa gold member
    July 14

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    wow how beautiful and true your poem it fantastic
    love therein..Can ignite greater fires of passion...
    Brighter than any fireworks!Just the touching and nearness Can electrify your body...True roamnce is wihtin the heart It also grows each day..Like the budding rose.If it dies, it was never love...for
    Love is much more than sex...Its Caring...Touching...
    Kissing...and Feeling each others silent emotions!
    And when felt...Love, can last for Eterities!this kind of love you have described last for eternity and creates a bond that can never be severed good luck in the contest


  • wildfiredreamer gold member
    July 13

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    I am so in love with this poem.............I just experienced something like this this recently, well partly, just being together was like making love beyond any I have ever had. Just the look in his eyes when he touched my arm, or drew me close and kissed me, each sent chills over me knowing how he feels for me. and knowing I still have something to look forward too one day.
    There is something to be said for a young man with old fashion ways.

  • WritingWretch gold member
    July 13

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    I'm not good on commenting on love

    poems. Too old for all that panting. I think this has subtle erotic appeal, but I like metaphoric description. Wish I could add more but I just don't have enough libido to do justice to this type of poetry.