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Rhythm rolls,
lose control,
catching beats,
as feet sweep streets...

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In 10 words make me wanna dance, and pump the jam up!

Pic cred:http://www.flickr.com/search/?q=dancing+in+the+streets&page=4

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  • SageyBaby
    July 14, 2008

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    It made me want to dance! Simply creative. "rhythm rolls" sort of rolls of the tounge doesn't it? Welldone, great write


  • Kari gold member
    July 14, 2008

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    That has a very catchy tone with it. It made me smile when I read the end.
    Thank you very much for your entry


  • No longer in use
    July 13, 2008

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    Wonderfully done. I wish to dance now. Not really. I need music...that's not true either. I can dance anywhere. Just I'm too shy to do so. Hah there's some info about me. Don't tell any one.