In mirrored conflict,
detonating throughout
frontal lobes,
pausing the spark;
triggering the trip:
ice crystals
decimating the minions.
Aerated headspace
bloodburst in radial thirst;
eradicates the struggle
'til the high
recedes
Author notes
Image Credit: Abstract by enrique
A contest entry
- Activate by Pamela A Lamppa.
1750 points, ended July 31, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Oh my, that was quite well done! Nice take on the image and very good use of the word bank. I did not expect this and I a pleasantly surprised. THANK YOU for an excellent entry. Best of luck in the judging.
~Pamela 
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I have a poem in this contest I think.
For me that picture kills my will to write.
The word bank was easy.
To capture both together(I never bother with untruth) in truth is a feat.
It is great you have given life to this useless picture.
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o.O
Unquiely gripping; the expressive words just hold me intruiged til I reach the end and I am almost gagging for more.
Excellent write!
Best of luck
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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I like that. That really is what it had to be, a high. Like the way you have used the word bank.
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