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I'm ready




pieces of sun bounce in my sway
timed to its beat





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Happy Birthday to the host
Prompt => In 10 words make me wanna dance, and pump the jam up!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uAIAET2e2y8&feature=related

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  • daviscth silver member
    July 20, 2008
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    Thanks....


  • Kari gold member
    July 14, 2008

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    I love the flow in this piece. That's very clever. Thank you for your entry and wishes!