Pause not or actuate this point.
Blood lines conflict or decimate.
Crystals spark, trigger and detonate
Spark radial those ice struggle eradicate.
Don’t burst or explode as dynamite.
Aerate this trip I am done all bright.
Author notes
Had fun with all your words.
A contest entry
- Activate by Pamela A Lamppa.
1750 points, ended July 31, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Your twenty one words My title + six lines ?
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This made me smile. Thank you for a tight and terrific entry. Well done. Best of luck in the judging. ~Pamela
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Actually, this sounds like a better 'high' than mine could ever describe!
Line 3, as mentioned by other readers, is particularly effective and packs quite a visual punch. Certainly would have fitted the picture perfectly.
Well deciphered and set out.
Bravo!
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To write on beauty is easy.
To write in beauty for even the useless picture is greater.
I must congratulate you for you part in the contest.
You have a great observation for plant and animal life.
And the same reflects in your poems.
I have a lot of knowledge for flowers and plants.
And see and feel your poem in this contest come alive.
What more can I say.
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Just lovely your used the words provided. You have done an excellent write and read..with a nice concept...You talent is showing again...
novy
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You've packed in those words in a very impressive way. I like "crystals spark, trigger and detonate."
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wow, good use of the word bank, I like what you have done with the rhyming sequence, it adds power to the punch. Thanks for sharing your talent and good luck in the contest.
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