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she'll call me a silly goose

i am such a mess
alone now for so long
that i will fall in love with you
before you're out the door and gone
i am such a mess
an ounce of your affection
would offer little rest
so please forgive me mystery girl
that at your feet i might unfurl
and if given benefit of doubt
only your name shall i shout
the girl that saved a boy
and ended cupids drought
but for now i sit and wait
hoping you wont come too late
that the noose will stay a rope
and that my heart remains afloat

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  • Vidasmoke
    July 14, 2008
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    nice and to the point short
    good luck