Hold me;
there's music
in the way
we move
together.
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A contest entry
- Lets get ready to rummbleeeeeeee! In 10 Words! by Kari.
395 points, ended July 14, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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when i read this i fell into my dream where i was swaying with a deceased loved one
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I loved this... It made me think of swaying gently with someone I love, under moonlight with soft music playing..
And in only ten words, you conveyed such a powerful image, and invoked private and long forgotten memories in the reader - Love it.
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Not your best but beautiful in its simplicity. Good job! - ocerus
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Well, this sounds like the after party. The music of happiness in love.
Congratulations on the silver.
Marlene -
This is really nice. Well done. Such clarity and great word spaces. Anthony.
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This is so very sweet, and nice to read. It does make me want to dance, and turn the music on.
Well done
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I absolutely love this piece!
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Wow! This is the best 10 word ditty I've read yet in this contest. A real piece of poetry here! Excellent take on the prompt, and warm wishes in the contest!
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