when I looked into your eyes
endowed with beauty and full of lust
holding you into the night
kissing you passionately was a must
when you pressed your gentle lips to mine
you made me weak down to my knees
I felt a shiver down through my spine
touching your skin was soft and smooth to me
I touched your hands and then your thighs
the smile you gave me as confirmation
you opened up and your eyes met mine
waiting for that good lovin affection
I took my fingers and spread her open
took my tongue and licked that button
two fingers in one hand on her breast
felt good to me I have to confess
with my fingers I fucked her
and soaked they were getting
arched her back and started to quiver
with her moans she started sweating
she grabbed the sheets with her hands so tight
saying oh how she's going to cum
I positioned my mouth just right
circled her clit with my thumb
all her juices came running out
cleaned her up with my tongue
I looked at her and was very proud
that she enjoyed herself and had some fun
I asked "when is your husband coming home?"
Author notes
I do not claim this photo being used with this poem to be my own. Google Images
A contest entry
- Lady Love (Adult Lesbian Poems Wanted) by Sesheta.
300 points, ended September 13, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I Kissed A Girl by Gay-Militant.
1200 points, ended July 31, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Bored Enter!!!!! Need to Read Something!!!!! by fairytalelovestory.
700 points, ended January 8, 130 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful
Very well done. A terrific creation. Such marvelous expression. Best of luck in the contest.
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wow
not only does your poem make anyone quiver I like it because the flow gives it a feeling of being sensually softly spoken like whispering it into someones ear as opposed to whoa!! yeah!!! ... does that make sense ? lol
thats what it did for me anyways
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mmmmmmmmmmmm puts a good pic in my mind. Two women together is such a turn on. Well writen.
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man! This is a great scene! You are great! Keep on writing.
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Woooooooohoooooooo
Hey ive been here hehehe
and yep....... its gooooooooooood!!!!
this had me on the edge of my seat!
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damn that was so erotic i couldnt stop reading and smilingway to go hot
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a wonderful nite you wrote and the last line was awsome ... real life lol
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Yeah! I really enjoyed this one... beautiful flow, and a killer last line. Keep writing like this, and you are sure to become one of my favs.
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WHEW!
This is terribly erotic! I mean wow ,ouch! it hurt my eyes so good! l.o.l. great piece of ..l.o.l.
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This is soooo good!!! This may be hot hot hotchocolate, but that ending is pure gold.
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The last line is a whopper and a surprise, it elevates this poem to special. I also thought that you should find a lesbian/bi poetry venue so that you could read it out loud, I really think it would be well read aloud and recited, the flow is good, is never broken, there are no awkward moments. Great.
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lol the ending was funny. the rest was HOT HOT HOT HOT
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sooooooo terribly erotic!
So lustfully evil!
I came before I could comment!
Kisssssssessssss....al over, hottie!
Galaxy2
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provocative & sensual
a pleasure to read....Liked the ending
~sugar~
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i liked this a lot you did a great job with your bi sexuality fingertips good luck to you in the contest
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Hot
salsa hot and margarita sweet -
sensual delight to read
the passion and lust leave me breathless
craving more raw desire
light and love
Robert
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breath-taking!!
Woman to Woman, foolin' 'round with married chicks,
Man to Man, here I am, LOVIN' UP with married dicks --
I LOVE IT -- never mind the husband (or, for me, the wife!) -- get you some more o' that foxy married lady!!
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Hot tongue hot choco lick
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